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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-03-21 02:27 PM


The first smell was
Of understand
Is it a lot different from a holiday resort

Food was probably better
Markers on the site of the road
Exhause pipes on top of the vehicles

Guaranteed driving test
paid the guy $100

Best coffee I ever drunk

I know the people who live on violence
Dont understand anything else

I say this

When you have destroyed this planet

Who is left to protect you

dave


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Grover
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since 2004-01-27
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London, ON, Canada
1 posted 2004-03-21 02:34 PM


The only answer I know is: God's mercy will be the only thing left.
DavePage
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2 posted 2004-03-21 03:04 PM


Who is your God Grover

Dave

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
3 posted 2004-03-21 03:51 PM


It is indeed high emergency, Dave.

Your poem is like watching a documentary and feel uneasy ...

I tell you, we must awaken to LOVE!

God is LOVE.

Love, Margherita

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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4 posted 2004-03-21 04:40 PM


who is left to protect  you?

the same who was always there, dont u think?

DavePage
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5 posted 2004-03-21 05:21 PM


Private email on that Ink

and when the hell did I need protection

I am too busy paying my taxes

And no-one seems to get in the way of paying them

and

Maybe sailing or flying or maybe

No fins or feathers at the moment

dave

DavePage
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6 posted 2004-03-21 05:30 PM


Margherita, Grover, Ink

You are a most talented bunch and I am coming down from the days after a stuff me as high as I can go bad project and fought for the paid 4 weeks and the rest of some destruction to face, and I will be there.

Without people like yourselves to take my words  I would probably go spare

Owe you a lot

Dave

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