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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-02-27 09:04 AM



I remember
when I could write those words
that would speak my heart
and tell of the love I felt inside
when I thought it could never happen
again.

I remember
when your name was always on my lips
and I felt I could never drown
with you near enough
to float me with just a word
or two.

It scares me
to think that my feelings
are no longer of any meaning
and that I again will be living in the darkness
that surrounded me
before you.

This is my voice in words,
my heart in print,
without guidelines or rhyme or style.
Just an embrace of thoughts
wondering if they ever reach
into the depths where once I felt
no regrets.

M


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2004-02-27 09:06 AM


Maureen,
I think so.

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2 posted 2004-02-27 09:13 AM




sing this for me too please....
you are certainly heard here...
beautiful bittersweet write

Goldenrose
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3 posted 2004-02-27 11:22 AM


Nice write M....you convey your feelings well..

Thank you..

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

sea_of_okc
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4 posted 2004-02-27 11:29 AM



"This is my voice in words,
my heart in print,"

And I would say both your words and heart are lovely though somewhat melancholy at the moment. Hang in there...  

Enchantress
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5 posted 2004-02-27 11:52 AM


I could feel the ache Maureen...
Yet so wonderfully expressed.
Hugs~


~ Can I keep you? ~
            -Casper  
            

passing shadows
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6 posted 2004-02-27 02:25 PM


ah, those lovely regrets...sigh
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