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James_A_Fraser
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Out Making Anticlines

0 posted 2004-02-19 05:21 PM



You
are my
sunlight

I, your
clouds and
rain

rainbow
love



© Copyright 2004 James A. Fraser - All Rights Reserved
Sadelite
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1 posted 2004-02-19 06:49 PM


Magnificiently worded;it takes two to make a rainbow!

                Sadie

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2 posted 2004-02-19 06:58 PM


Thought provoking James, excellent work sir!!
Martie
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3 posted 2004-02-19 07:17 PM


Jamie

How very beautiful this is!  

Sunshine
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4 posted 2004-02-19 07:26 PM



Crystal
in dewdrops

Brilliants
in hoarfrost

Indian tears
in onyx

Tiger eyes
in glaze

purring

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just out of reach
5 posted 2004-02-19 07:46 PM


Delightful !!
hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet



    

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6 posted 2004-02-20 11:37 AM


This one both warms and dissolves my heart. *S* What a beautiful love you've described! *S*
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7 posted 2004-02-21 12:08 PM


bump  ---too good to miss; I'm sending this one up again for another round!
           Sadelite

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8 posted 2004-02-21 03:18 AM


fantastic!
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