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garysgirl
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0 posted 2004-02-19 12:30 PM


Even in my ups and downs
you are always there for me
When a happy smile I cease to wear
my heart you seem to see

My many moods come breaking through
at times when I least expect
My self control I work to have
to keep my self respect

My world I am living in here below
has much worries and  problems
I might be better off if I just would not
be trying to always help solve them

But it seems to be that is how I am
it may be too late to change
If you will just promise to be there for me
my thoughts I will attempt to rearrange

So when my family and friends
their burdens with me they will share
If we will forever be there for each other
together all problems we shall bear


© Copyright 2004 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
Bonnie j
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1 posted 2004-02-19 12:37 PM


This sounds like a prayer of thank you for being at your side.Always ging a helping hand and added strength when needed.
Good one.
Bon-Bon

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2 posted 2004-02-19 12:39 PM


Thanks, Bon-Bon.
That's exactly what it was.
Hugs  
Ethel

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3 posted 2004-02-19 12:46 PM


"So when my family and friends
their burdens with me they will share
If we will forever be there for each other
together all problems we shall bear

Beautiful sweet lady~Much enjoyed.

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~      
            

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4 posted 2004-02-19 01:07 PM


Thank you, Nancy Lee.
I appreciate you so much.
Hugs  
Ethel

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5 posted 2004-02-19 01:47 PM


Ethel, the writing of your thoughts and feelings, just keeps getting better and better. Know I am here if you need an ear to bend...lol.  hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet



    

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6 posted 2004-02-19 01:49 PM


Absolutely lovely Ethel.  Hugs.
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7 posted 2004-02-19 02:04 PM


Warm and tender thoughts expressed quite beautifuly!

Eric

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8 posted 2004-02-19 02:22 PM


Dear Ethel, nothing touches me more than this expression of gratitude you share so beautifully here. You value who is there for you.
Together indeed all problems are solved.
Love and hugs. Margherita

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9 posted 2004-02-19 02:27 PM


There for each other - that's certainly the way it should be! Nice poem
choshi
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10 posted 2004-02-19 03:29 PM


Thank you Ethel for this beautiful expression of self feelings and gratitude....~P
Susan Caldwell
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11 posted 2004-02-19 04:16 PM


Ethel~

You are such a sweet wonderful soul.  

I am glad I "know" you and can read your words.

"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.."
~Dido~

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12 posted 2004-02-19 04:44 PM


Very expressive. I enjoyed this poem! Grover.
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13 posted 2004-02-19 06:58 PM




(smniles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you have a most loving and golden heart that everyone in your family must have too, yay, you haver a golden family, and may many happy blessings be shared between your loved ones forever! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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14 posted 2004-02-19 07:06 PM


enjoyed
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15 posted 2004-02-19 09:36 PM


Chris, thank you, my friend. I know that
you will always be here for me. I appreciate it, too.
.
Thank you very much, Donna.
You are so sweet. Hugs back to you.
.
Eric, thank you. That's very
sweet of you to say.
.
Thank you so much, Margherita.
You are such a sweet soul. I
really do appreciate my friends
and family, as well as all of my
friends here....like you.
.
illusion, thank you very much.
Yes, it's so great for people to
be there for each other.
.
.
I appreciate each one of you so much.
Hugs to all of you,
Ethel


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16 posted 2004-02-19 09:42 PM


Thank you, choshi.
That's very kind of you to say.
.
Thank you very much, Susan.
It is very nice to know you, too.
.

Thank you, Grover.
I'm really glad that you liked my poem.
.
Thank you, Noah.
You are so sweet. I really
appreciate you, my friend.
.
.
I can't express how much I depend on all of
you here at PIP. I appreciate each and every
one of you so very much.
Hugs to all of you,  
Ethel


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