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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-02-13 07:08 AM

Glance Back

I see myself pooled
within your eyes
a look that moves
the sighs of tides
drops that kiss
each grain of sand
is just the shift
of time in your hands
pearl washed shells
brought by wave
each are words
the gifts you gave
bones of you left
upon the beach
tiny bits to share
within my reach
there is a heart
that beats mine in tune
you are the shore, the sea
the sand and moon
glance back, you too
shall see me there
I am your breeze
your breath my air

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2004-02-13 08:15 AM

I am your breeze
your breath my air

very lovely, Helen

M

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

2 posted 2004-02-13 09:29 AM

h, beautiful!

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2004-02-13 09:59 AM

I'm keepin' this!!! Awesome! hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."

— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-02-13 12:37 PM

makes me wanna head down to the beach today...I think I will

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

5 posted 2004-02-13 01:12 PM

woo hoo, Helen! This is really well done.

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

6 posted 2004-02-13 01:16 PM

This is great; thanks for the read

Horses are my life
"Poets have been mysteriously silent on the subject of cheese. "
--G. K.Chesterto

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2004-02-13 01:18 PM

Very lovely Helen....beautiful words.
Hugs~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

8 posted 2004-02-14 12:35 PM

Helen, this was amazing, as are
all of your poems! I hope you have a
Happy Valentines Day!!

Richy

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

9 posted 2004-02-14 12:36 PM

Helen, I don't know how you do it! Loved it! Happy Valentine's Day!

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

10 posted 2004-02-14 08:37 AM

helen - to glance back and see what one will see....

BC

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

11 posted 2004-02-19 09:35 PM

h,

Sweet soul!
Another for the book!
{{{hugs}}}

s.a.g.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

12 posted 2004-02-19 10:01 PM

(big angel hugs) Oh Helen, this is so very beautifully envisioned, sweet friend, God Bless You, I dream so much to be right there always by the beachside, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

13 posted 2004-02-19 10:04 PM

So well written and so romantic! Grover.

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