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scorpio
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0 posted 2004-02-17 07:48 AM


Yes?


Do you need to hear
How much I love you?
Do you long to be held in my arms?
Would words whisperedin your ear
Make your heart beat faster?
Would my touch make you quiver?
Would desire stir in your soul
When our lips meet?

If the answer " yes" is on your lips
Then join me in this bliss..


believe in what your heart feels...

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1 posted 2004-02-17 08:33 AM



If she says no...I'm stepping in line!   Good morning, Scorpio!  This...is a smile!

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2 posted 2004-02-17 08:42 AM


ah.. nicely done Scorp.. the romantic as always.... you I am sure cause more than one eyelid to bat...

enjoyed

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3 posted 2004-02-17 09:25 AM


Scorpio, I do believe you are on a roll!
Another post from you again this moring..
The ladies of Passions are forming a line as we speak.
There is so much said here in just a few words.
Your lady would be crazy to say 'no'.
~Soft Smiles & Hugs, Tinker~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~      
            

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4 posted 2004-02-17 10:25 AM


scorpio
LOL did you get a taker? Enjoyed the read.

scorpio
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5 posted 2004-02-17 12:09 PM


Karilea, I'm glad this brought a smile to you.  Thank you.

Thank you, Ron.  I just write as my heart dictates. Batting eyelids and fluttering hearts are a spin-off.

Tinker, she did say yes...several times.  She is my muse and her love inspires my efforts on these blue pages.  Thank you sweet Enchantress.

Yes Sy, I have a taker.  And she's a keeper.  Thank you my friend.

believe in what your heart feels...

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6 posted 2004-02-17 12:31 PM


Oh yes, just perfect!  

Sweet stuff scorpio~

scorpio
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7 posted 2004-02-17 07:10 PM


Thank you Lori for your kind words.  Much appreciated.

believe in what your heart feels...

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8 posted 2004-02-17 08:05 PM




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9 posted 2004-02-17 10:46 PM


Really enjoyed this one scorpio!
She is one lucky lady!   hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet



    

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10 posted 2004-02-18 03:16 AM


sweet write! real sweeeeet!
scorpio
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11 posted 2004-02-18 08:43 AM


Thank you Chris.  But I'm the lucky one!!

Very kind of your to say that Dixie.  Thank you.

believe in what your heart feels...

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12 posted 2004-02-19 10:42 AM


Oh, I do like this! *S* And I'm glad you got the right answer! *S*
scorpio
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13 posted 2004-02-19 10:52 AM


Thank you Suthern.  So am I!!

believe in what your heart feels...

choshi
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14 posted 2004-02-19 03:54 PM


Oh yes, yes, yes...... ~P
Susan Caldwell
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15 posted 2004-02-19 03:56 PM


Yes.

Very well done.

"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.."
~Dido~

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16 posted 2004-02-19 04:34 PM


Thank you Choshi.  I appreciate your kind words.

Susan I'm glad you  enjoyed this. Thank you.

believe in what your heart feels...

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17 posted 2004-02-19 10:09 PM




(big angel hugs) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautifully romantic, sweet friend, how can one not refuse such a wonderfully devoted plea, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Grover
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18 posted 2004-02-19 10:16 PM


Kind of like a romantic interview! Grover.
scorpio
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19 posted 2004-02-19 10:30 PM


Thank you Noah.  Glad you dropped in for a read. I appreciate your support.

Yes sort of, Grover.  Thank you

believe in what your heart feels...

iliana
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20 posted 2004-02-21 05:33 PM


Quite an invitation!  Hope she said yes to you!
scorpio
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21 posted 2004-02-21 05:47 PM


Iliana thank you...and she said "Yes".

believe in what your heart feels...

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