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Huge Little Miracles |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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First morning light, to me, develops and enhances Rationing the soul, as well as the mind Thoughtful heightened electrical energy Standing up vivid, for what it believes I place morning in my nap sack Excited and elated to share, skipping off to work Wanting to share…. Storing atmospheric currents and sensitive perceptions Not always knowing what to make of it all? As lively openness & perceptions lead me deep Into the downfalls of society I suppose they find me amusing, In an theoretical sort of way… I’m a Van Gogh painting not yet born Some delightful inner sources, always takes my hand I’m always looking for myself within reactions of others And yes, at times….I learn…oh so much Exhausting others, speaking endlessly of experiences I know their eyes roll, and tumble with exhaustion Meaning no harm, but wanting so, to share expressions and heart It is best though, to let go of what cannot be resolved Until the next time, surrendering an all encompassing trust Trusting in the process of letting go….patience and allowance Oh, wishing so I could live by my own expressions Rolling with the punches and figuring things out on my own I am an expressive excited chatterer…and want to experience it all Finding such memorizing familiarity in a tiny caterpillar Especially the big wooly ones, which speaks to me of coming winter Things that most care nothing about… Its been said, I am so full of myself…But, I’m not I can hear them thinking…”sheessshhhh, it doesn’t take much” Yet the morning awakens still, smiles, takes me by the hand Lets me talk, talk, talk, with excitement and a warm smile on its face The innocence is still alive and well, expression jumps high I don’t really mind being alone, as, in reality I’m not I like who I am, and my life, as boring as it may seem to some Thanks to a few really good friends…with me they practice endurance Bless their hearts and finding another magnificent cadence There are many in this world who do indeed go the distance |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
First morning light, to me, develops and enhances Rationing the soul, as well as the mind Thoughtful heightened electrical energy Standing up vivid, for what it believes I place morning in my nap sack Excited and elated to share, skipping off to work Wanting to share…. Storing atmospheric currents and sensitive perceptions ====================== I suppose they find me amusing, In an theoretical sort of way… I’m a Van Gogh painting not yet born ========================= Some delightful inner sources, always takes my hand I’m always looking for myself within reactions of others Oh, wishing so I could live by my own expressions Rolling with the punches and figuring things out on my own I am an expressive excited chatterer…and want to experience it all ==================== Yet the morning awakens still, smiles, takes me by the hand Lets me talk, talk, talk, with excitement and a warm smile on its face The innocence is still alive and well, expression jumps high ========================== Bless their hearts and finding another magnificent cadence There are many in this world who do indeed go the distance ============================ I had to smile while reading this...finding my own reflection in many of your lines. I too find such excitement in the daily miracle of nature. You've got some great lines in this..your opening verse of morning is splendid! and this line.... I place morning in my nap sack thats adorable...a great personification as is this analogy... I’m a Van Gogh painting not yet born Wonderful expression in this write of anticpation. The perfect poem to read in the morning as the sun comes up.  Well I cant say what I might believe ... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lee~ I SO love the all of you~  'Some delightful inner sources, always takes my hand I’m always looking for myself within reactions of others And yes, at times …I learn…oh so much' See ? ... it's there, the 'all of you' on display ... sharing with us all~ Thank you for being just who you are~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
A wonderful title to go along with a terrific write I'm glad I read this Lee it was very interesting and thought provoking Take Care, Richy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ This mornings write is a delight. It is a phase we all go through but a delightful one. Enjoy there will be others.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thank you for the insight and outlook....much needed on some of my dreary morns when I don't even want to get out of bed |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Lee J You write what you feel very well...I am glad you do.... "I am an expressive excited chatterer…and want to experience it all" I hope you do, then I can read about your experiences in your poem/chatter enjoyed ________ice ><> |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"I like who I am, and my life, as boring as it may seem to some Thanks to a few really good friends…with me they practice endurance Bless their hearts and finding another magnificent cadence There are many in this world who do indeed go the distance." (big angel hugs) Yay! Oh Lee, this is so very beautiful, sweet friend, youth and innocence are what makes the miracles come alive so keep the sunrises in your sack, yay, God Bless You, you have the spirit of joy in you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lee, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thanks to a few really good friends…with me they practice endurance Bless their hearts and finding another magnificent cadence There are many in this world who do indeed go the distance Lee, this is so how I feel....I am so blessed to have some really good friends and loved ones who love my "chatter", and all the rest of me too...especially my Honey-Love. Thank you for being you, Lee. Hugs Ethel |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Thanks for sharing this great write-- can relate to much of it! Grover. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Lee--this is my favorite of yours so far -- what a wonderful soul you are -- "I’m a Van Gogh painting not yet born." |
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