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alan6501
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0 posted 2004-02-15 06:16 PM



STEADY???

Steady, can things ever really be truly steady??

No, there's alway this topsy turvy feeling and I'm moving ever so slightly within it.

The wind is never merciful and will always do whetever the hell it pleases so I just deal with it and take things as they come.

You must learn to move with things, or you'll be choking down the regrets as you are quickly left behind...


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Hi everyone! I haven't posted in forever but here is some food for thought or whatever you want to call it. It could be loads better, what do you guys think?

© Copyright 2004 Alan B. Stallsmith - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2004-02-15 07:02 PM


alan6501
A good thoughtful piece.

Sadelite
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2 posted 2004-02-15 08:50 PM


Alan,
   this sounds what I was talking about in a senryu I wrote last week.  Here it is if you want to take a look.   Much enjoyed your thoughts. /pip/Forum88/HTML/000974.html

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-02-16 03:59 AM


true dat
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