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dingusjr
Member

since 2003-09-24

Posts 415
Missouri

0 posted 2004-02-15 10:59 AM

Cape swinging down back alleys
You greet the girls with a ghoulish grin,
Teeth flashing in the gas lamp glow.

We stare at grainy pictures
And cringe at the carnage.
As you span the age in
Nameless immortality.

Was it spurned love
Or a badgering wife that drove you..
As you plowed through the ladies
Like a flashing blade.

[This message has been edited by dingusjr (02-15-2004 11:58 AM).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-02-15 11:19 AM

I watched an episode on Jack the Ripper the other night, myself...

I wonder if we might ever uncover the true identity.

Good write!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2004-02-15 11:39 AM

You made me shiver! Powerful write.
Love, Margherita

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

3 posted 2004-02-15 11:43 AM

Very creative! Grover.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2004-02-15 01:42 PM

Larry~
Poetically pondering the mysteries of time~

EXCELLENT~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Bonnie j
Senior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

5 posted 2004-02-15 03:57 PM

So many out in the world present and past that have a sickness of the mind. Causing pain and sorrow to all that happen into the path of their illness and rage.
Sad poem.
Bon-Bon

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2004-02-16 11:12 AM

Lots of questions... no definitive answers. *S* I like this write! *S*

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2004-02-16 11:21 AM

Larry

You are good at painting character with just a few brush strokes and a question. Enjoyed this!

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

8 posted 2004-02-20 02:25 PM

All of that and more, I'm thinking!

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2004-02-21 02:26 PM

whew!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2004-02-21 02:41 PM

(scared at edge of seat) Oh Larry, this movie has always scared me silly, sweet friend, it gets to me like a ratchet literally, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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