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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2004-02-14 05:52 AM



Kisses In Your Mind

It's early morn, the phone it rings
Awakens me, gives start
Was dreaming, I, a pleasant one
No shadows in the dark.

Had arms around me, warm and strong
With breath an inch away
When exhaled, tickled me a bit
Preferred awhile to stay.

It rang again, I let it go
Too early still, was time
Instead I rested, filled with thoughts
Had kisses in my mind.

Remembered when you planted them
Not kisses, but the thoughts
How often times you teased me so
Eyes roaming body, soft.

Until you saw me, on the edge
Then lips to skin, would find
You planted all the kiss of want
As kiss thoughts in my mind.

Whenever you're away from me
And dreams take me on high
The thoughts of lips on lips, of mine
Replays in my mind's eye.

Hoping that the same is true
When times are tough or sad
That kisses float from me to you
When I am feeling "bad".

So when your eyes upon this read
No matter who, you'll find
Someone out there loving you
Sends kisses in your mind.

M

*2k


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (02-14-2004 08:05 AM).]

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Youngatheart
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1 posted 2004-02-14 07:37 AM


I really really love this! You have such a unique talent for arranging your words into beautiful phrases. Terrific!!
Bill Charles
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2 posted 2004-02-14 08:58 AM


nakdthoughts - those lovely kisses in my mind you write about...

BC

Margherita
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3 posted 2004-02-14 02:25 PM


Lovely dreams to linger on indeed.
Beautifully expressed, dear Maureen.
Love, Margherita

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4 posted 2004-02-16 02:34 AM


kisses in the mind , a excellent idea indeed , a matter of fact a just sent out a few hehheee thanks for the idea and for leting us all enjoy this one ....

..jwolf

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5 posted 2004-02-16 03:17 AM


oh M...this is simply delightful!
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6 posted 2004-02-16 03:22 AM


oh, this is lovely
here is kisses on your page

Kit McCallum
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7 posted 2004-02-16 07:23 AM


"Remembered when you planted them
Not kisses, but the thoughts
How often times you teased me so
Eyes roaming body, soft."

This was absolutely wonderful, Maureen. I thoroughly enjoyed this from beginning to end. Such sweet sentiments and recollections ... and the flow was delightful. I really enjoyed this!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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8 posted 2004-02-16 08:53 AM


Beautiful Maureen...
So nice to have kisses on your mind.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~      
            

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