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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2004-02-15 01:02 PM




peeking heads
flowerbeds
yellow fun
smiling sun

swing me on
the cresent moon
magic moment
brides of june

constellation
celebration
unchained melody
5 temptations

ronnie walks
in rain with you
wake up suzie
isle of view

light my fire
sleepy jean
live for today
my dancing queen

catch the wind
flying kites
rescue me now
my handsome knight

roller coaster
spinning wheel
up on the roof
riders squeal

line your pocket
full of shells
blow on flowers
wish them well

shorter skirts
midnight sand
hot pink toes
trim legs, tanned

radio magic
paul sings michele
check the mirror girl
damn!
you've aged well

take me in the sand
love me right now
under the boardwalk
like a brooklyn boy knows how

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-02-15 01:03 PM


*throwing arms into air* YES!

SWEET!

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Member Patricius
since 2001-08-31
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just out of reach
2 posted 2004-02-15 01:14 PM




Perfect !!
Keepin' this !!
hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet



    

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2004-02-15 01:14 PM


Wow, Michele, this has such a wonderful pace. And it holds the beauty of Spring ... you make us yearn.
Thank you for sharing it again!
Much enjoyed.
Love, Margherita

ice
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since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404
Pennsylvania
4 posted 2004-02-15 02:42 PM


Inky
Loved reading this, it sings well spring feelings....removes some of the choke of winter..
Thank you
______ice
  ><>

Grover
Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
5 posted 2004-02-15 02:48 PM


Seems to have alot of song titles/lyrics/artists? Very lively... enjoyed it much! Grover.
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
6 posted 2004-02-15 02:57 PM


Wow Michele!
I give this a ten..love the beat and it's great to dance to..!
Oops sorry...I really got into the groove there and felt like dancin'.
A keeper for sure
Hugs~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~      
            

Richy
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050

7 posted 2004-02-15 06:23 PM



"roller coaster
spinning wheel
up on the roof
riders squeal

line your pocket
full of shells
blow on flowers
wish them well

shorter skirts
midnight sand
hot pink toes
trim legs, tanned

radio magic
paul sings michele
check the mirror girl
damn!
you've aged well"

Love your style Michelle!

This was so full of life!


  

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
8 posted 2004-02-15 06:30 PM


Hey...loved this!  Such memories - some my own...

jwesley

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
9 posted 2004-02-15 06:32 PM


thanks guys and gals

l. 2. 3. all together now, let's sing for spring

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
10 posted 2004-02-15 06:56 PM


inkedgoddess
You rang a bell with the last stanza. Enjoyed.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
11 posted 2004-02-15 07:00 PM


check the mirror girl
damn!

What a babe!!  
Nicely done and so much fun!

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300
MA, USA
12 posted 2004-02-16 06:29 AM


Inked Goddess...I think this is a lovely prelude to Spring. Very good!!!! ***Ivy Rose
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