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Open Poetry #31

Hall or Mirrors

MexicoCityBlues
Junior Member

since 2004-01-04

Posts 48
The Point of Know Return

0 posted 2004-02-14 01:13 AM

this hall of mirrors is broken
broken faces in disillusion
Fun House Fiend
in this hall of mirrors
reflecting images of disposition
rerun television
whore house delusion
in silent keep-sake naps

nighttime creeping up slowly
behind paranoid eyes
potency of a burning house
pop culture
dying dusty skies red
with plastered arrogance

exuberating disposition
echoes on the far shore
rain repercussion brings new love
sends forsaken streams to ripples
rounding the far shore
in this overwhelming hall of mirrors

turmoil reflects highly
in this hall of mirrors
what’s this ravishing rotten gun
been shot through the head
with these hoarded bullets
crash like hail, breaking glass
in this transitive hall of mirrors

riff…………………………
little burning barn sparkles
under crimson light spilling;
flooding the moaning floor
of this boardless hall of mirrors

"The story of life is quicker than the wink of an eye. The story of love is Hello and Goodbye. Until we meet again..." -Jimi Hendrix

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2004-02-14 03:14 AM

flooding the moaning floor
of this boardless hall of mirrors

What a concept!!
Much enjoyed your fiery write~

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2004-02-14 08:38 AM

MexicoCityBlues - enjoyed the read this Saturday morning...

BC

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