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Kazm
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0 posted 2004-02-12 03:00 PM



Roses Three

Whisper to the roses three,
          roses three,
          roses three;
that our love was meant to be,
          my fair lady!

Breathe the scent of roses six,
          roses six,
          roses six;
in your heart my love to fix,
          my fair lady.

Speak to me of roses ten,
          roses ten,
          roses ten;
tell me you'll return again,
          my fair lady....

                                                 Kaz

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Grover
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1 posted 2004-02-12 03:06 PM


It'd make a great song! Grover.
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2 posted 2004-02-12 03:09 PM


yes-- a great valentine song

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3 posted 2004-02-13 10:02 AM


Simple and sweet...I like this!

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5 posted 2004-02-13 01:56 PM


What a beautiful bouquet you've penned... may it ever keep growing! *S* This is a delightful valentine for your lady. *S*
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