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0 posted 2004-02-10 09:30 PM




FIRST KISS
(A Candy Heart Poem)
By: Noah Eaton
2/16/01

A first kiss
Is the most magical gift of all
The moment I touched your lips
The heavens pour out, down into your heart I fall

You gave me my first kiss
Sharing it with you, when our hearts first touched
Heartstrings softly twitching, like the flick of a light switch
Feeling your love for the first time, wanting to forever love you so much

I think all the time about that first kiss
Holding you close, watching sparks fly feeling your warm breaths and sighs
And a sour lips were touching, I moaned my happiest wish
We would always be together, two true lovers for all time

I'll never forget that first kiss
You, my love, have given me the happiest feeling I've ever had
From your lovely ruby lips, you gave me, my first kiss
And with you, my love, it will never be the last!



"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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1 posted 2004-02-10 09:35 PM



you deserve all the kisses and hugs in the world for being the sweetest person...
this is a lovely poem and the pictures go so well with it! gorgeous!


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2 posted 2004-02-11 12:00 PM


"I think all the time about that first kiss
Holding you close, watching sparks fly feeling your warm breaths and sighs
And a sour lips were touching, I moaned my happiest wish
We would always be together, two true lovers for all time"

Well, my angel Noah, you have sent me back to my childhood tonight, sweet one!  hugs.....jo

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3 posted 2004-02-11 04:37 AM


awwwww Noah...this is adorable!
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4 posted 2004-02-11 04:45 AM


Ahhhhhhhh sigggghhhh.....

I smiled first as i saw the picture of the two kids, i actually laughed abit.

But as i read the poem i got red cheeks after it it touched me with such warmth.

Thank you noah taht was a smile and a read worth, i loved it.

Smile

Jes


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5 posted 2004-02-11 09:55 AM


Oh, how precious is this?!!
Valentine hugs and kisses to you sweet Noah.
Chris

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6 posted 2004-02-11 09:58 AM


Wonderful Noah!!  There is nothing quite like that first kiss!!

believe in what your heart feels...

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7 posted 2004-02-11 10:09 AM


Noah
Very nice and so timely...
Vanentine season reminds of happenings such as these.....
enjoyed
________ice
  ><>

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8 posted 2004-02-11 10:11 AM


AWWWWWWW, this is so cute and sweet, Noah.
Something all remember, I'm sure.
Hugs  
Ethel

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