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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2004-02-10 09:32 PM


    

MUCH ADO
(A Candy Heart Poem)
By: Noah Eaton
2/15/03

    

So this is how it feels
When daffodils become pied and daisies already peer
Fancy is bred deep where your heart spins like a sailors wheel
Upon these yellow sands December never felt so clear

Full many a magical evenings we are destined to seek
Your eyes are nothing like the sun, more lustrous than stained glass
That time of year seems to be coming back it seems
Where I fell in love with you all over again, at last...

    

So cover my graved thoughts with chenille
Sweet robin, your ode is all I aspire
I could die for you, then I could reincarnate and impel
Be your shield-bearer, acquire the rank of esquire

Much ado about nothing, but everything you are to me
In the marriage of true minds, our hearts also find a way
So mistress, lay back and breathe easily
As I compare you to a morning in May...


    



"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

© Copyright 2004 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2004-02-11 12:02 PM


Wow, Noah -- much ado, indeed!    luv ya, jo
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2 posted 2004-02-11 01:23 AM


Noahm this is so pretty. I love
your romantic poems.
Hugs  
Ethel

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3 posted 2004-02-11 01:53 AM


Noah....I always get so excited when I see another poem posted by you and you never disappoint me. This is so lovely. BRAVO!!
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4 posted 2004-02-11 02:41 AM


another pretty piece
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5 posted 2004-02-11 04:10 AM




Yes Noah, this poem, like all of your great
creations, has much ado with the caring and
compassionate person, you truly are...

You are a true wonder my friend...




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6 posted 2004-02-11 05:41 AM


Much Ado
about evrything that makes us Human Beings and not merely biological machines.

The art was interwoven to a very fine effect.

My compliments, it has been a long time since I have read your, or anyone's here, or most any internet site.
Nice to know you still write with delicate power.

Thinking all the way back to Papa's Poetry Circle, I do think you were there. Or perhaps my mind is advertising its wayward tendencies in its recent rearrangement.

Anyway, Well done, sayeth the Captain

"Sooner or later, Death makes a believer out of just about everyone."

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