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Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-02-08 02:42 PM

ravaged whispers

while mountains
disappears into the night
and
lightning flicks stars
from their velvet shelf
her throat, captured by desire
struggles to release
ravaged whispers
from
lust swollen lips,
kiss me

©snow

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

[This message has been edited by Snow (02-08-2004 07:39 PM).]

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

1 posted 2004-02-08 03:03 PM

Excellent, as usual! Grover.

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

2 posted 2004-02-08 03:14 PM

Thank you so much, Grover!!

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2004-02-08 07:36 PM

Snow, this is a lot said in a few words.
Very good.

Hugs

Ethel

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

4 posted 2004-02-08 09:39 PM

Thank you, Ethel !!
snow

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2004-02-09 12:44 PM

amazing

~~**~~
You read before you words I write-
See before you my soul,
spinning on waves of thought,
painting memories of time

LiquidMidnight
Member

since 2003-09-24

Posts 50

6 posted 2004-02-09 01:18 AM

Very sensual. I like it a lot.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-02-09 02:18 AM

very hot!

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

8 posted 2004-02-09 10:38 AM

Love this one too Snow. Back to the top it goes.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

9 posted 2004-02-09 03:22 PM

Dang! I was wondering where those mountains went?
Snowy I know what you mean about struggling to
get ravaged whispers out. I’m feeling a little choked up myself...

And I think I need some chapstick too

Snowy,

dingusjr
Member

since 2003-09-24

Posts 415
Missouri

10 posted 2004-02-09 03:29 PM

Good Lord, lady! WOW!

gadfly4you
Junior Member

since 2004-01-24

Posts 37

11 posted 2004-02-09 06:16 PM

I loved this, very sensual with so little. Love your descriptions!

Christopher

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

12 posted 2004-02-09 06:58 PM

very well done - sensual without being explicit (shown, not told), with a frenzied rush, much as one would expect emotions to be.

killer title.

C

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

13 posted 2004-02-10 01:53 AM

Beautiful, Snow!

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

14 posted 2004-02-10 02:03 AM

greeneyes, thank you for saying so.

liquidmidnight, i'm so glad you thought so, thank you for reading.

passing shadows, your always so kind! thank you

kevin, i'm glad you did. thank you!!

richy... *smile* you doing ok over there ? i have chapstick just in case

dingusjr... love that response! thank you.

gadfly4you...i don't believe one has to show too much in order to say a lot.. i'm glad you were able to see that :-D thank you!

christopher... thank you very much for your comment!!

iliana, :-) thank you!!
snow

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

15 posted 2004-02-10 03:15 PM

LadySnow~

'lightning flicks stars
from their velvet shelf '

*sighhhhhhhhh*

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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