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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-02-07 07:36 AM


The Elephant I

Here hides the elephant I
Behind the remnants of a sigh
Hiding behind impossible small
Hiding nothing, nothing at all.

What makes us think that we can shrink?
Behind the shadows of what we think
Behind evasions dance of conceal
Avoid realities true of reveal.

Each of us a space of form
For a little while a state of inform
There is no way to hide the wend
We all go from here to the end.

Of course each takes a different path
But really friends a bath is a bath
So why not dry the elephants eye
And change the sigh to a great big high

Just let the shrinking violet debut
An elephant made a presidents coup.


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-02-07 07:49 AM



A good lesson that we all leave a ripple...
and some of us, a wake.

Good morning, Sy...and Happy Birthday!!!


MARK V SHELDON
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2 posted 2004-02-07 07:51 AM


Elephants...  donkies...  They're all animals run wild in the zoo of our society.  Top of the morning to you, Seymour.  

-MVS


P.S.,

BIRTHDAY?  A most wholesome birthday to you, Sir!  May you see many more years of inspiration, observation,  contemplation, and dissertation!

You CAN make a difference: http://educate-yourself.org/

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2004-02-07 07:57 AM


you couldn't hide from us, SY

A Happy Birthday to you...


and many more

M

1slick_lady
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4 posted 2004-02-07 08:02 AM


birthday...did i hear birthday?
happy birthday to the king of sigh !!!!

Janet Marie
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5 posted 2004-02-07 09:07 AM


Elephants ... Dragons????
Lions Tigers and Bears...OH MY ...
your poetry makes em all sigh.





Randys had enough of this snow ...
the midwest has no warm beaches you know!
He's on his way back to the sunshine state ...
For your birthday he wont be late.

So save him some cake!!!!  


Happy Birthday me groovy Sy-guy...
I hope your day is as special as you are to me.



scorpio
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6 posted 2004-02-07 09:13 AM


Well done Sy.  Wise words!!

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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7 posted 2004-02-07 09:14 AM


Wonderful morning write as always Sy!
Even on your birthday!!
Have a wonderful birthday and a peaceful year ahead Sy!
Save me a piece of cake please...
And, I have some special birthday tea here for you!
~Hugs, Smiles, Cheers and tea, Nancy~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~
                
            

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8 posted 2004-02-07 09:37 AM


Good Morning SY,  thanx for an excellent
write...and a very happy one to you on
your day...

Duncan
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9 posted 2004-02-07 10:10 AM


Good Morning Sy and Happy Birthday!!  
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2004-02-07 11:42 AM


Sunshine
Thank you love. Hugs

MARK  
You are a gentleman and a scholar.

Maureen,
Thank you sweet.

1slick_lady
Thank you dear.

JM,
Tell Randy to blow up a little fire. LOL
Thank you for the kind wishes.
WWRS :kiss;:

scorpio,
Thank you kind sir.

Nancy,
Thank you sweet, I'll be right there for the tea.

Magnus,
Thank you Barry.

Duncan,
Thank you kind sir.

garysgirl
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11 posted 2004-02-07 11:47 AM


So why not dry the elephants eye
And change the sigh to a great big high

Just let the shrinking violet debut
An elephant made a presidents coup.


A very good lesson this morning, Seymour.
Thank you, I needed that today!
Hugs  
Ehtel


Grover
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12 posted 2004-02-07 12:00 PM


Very nice. Well written. Grover.
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13 posted 2004-02-07 12:04 PM


Happy Birthday, Sy!!!   ~K~
Martie
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14 posted 2004-02-07 12:06 PM


Happy birthday, Sy...and thank you for you poetic constancy!  
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15 posted 2004-02-07 12:41 PM




(does happy birthday dance) Yay! Happy Birthday, dearest Seymour, this singing sparrow wishes the elephant you a day filled with laughter and joy, yay! God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 2004-02-07 06:52 PM


Ehtel,
Thank you dear.

Grover
Thank you friend.

Kahlil,
I'll try my best.

Martie,
Thank you sweety

Noah,
The elephant thanks you.

iliana
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17 posted 2004-02-10 02:18 AM


Great, Sey!
Marge Tindal
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18 posted 2004-02-10 10:57 AM


Seymour~

Wondered just what to do
to celebrate this day with you
In my throat I had a lump ...
to share this little hefalump~

Bill's carving should make you grin
It's exactly the *gift* for a poetic friend~



HAPPY BIRTHDAY, SIR~

Love ya'
~*Marge & Bill*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

LeeJ
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19 posted 2004-02-10 11:36 AM


HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO MRRRR SYYYYYYY
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU

AND MANY MORRRRREEEEEE!

LOVED THE WRITE, AND WISHING YOU A FANTABULOUS DAY!
LOVE LEE J.

Seymour Tabin
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20 posted 2004-02-10 12:28 PM


iliana
Thank you sweet.

Marge,
You are a love.

LeeJ,
Thank you sweet, love you too.

Marge Tindal
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21 posted 2004-02-10 03:12 PM


Seymour~
This one's worth a

That's the elephant Bill was working on when we all met in New Poet Richey~

HAPPY BIRTHDAY youngun !

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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