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Snow
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0 posted 2004-02-07 05:50 PM


chisel me mp3



"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

© Copyright 2004 Snow - All Rights Reserved
Grover
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1 posted 2004-02-07 06:50 PM


Artistic and passionate! Grover.
Sadelite
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2 posted 2004-02-07 06:57 PM


"Tempt me tease and torture please..."
Whoa!  Content and sound....  You've got it all here, Snow!   Grover's right!
              

Youngatheart
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3 posted 2004-02-07 07:21 PM


wow oh wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2004-02-07 09:46 PM




(smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just saw the MP3 and just began downloading it, it'll take just ten minutes or so then I'll get back to you, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Snow, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Richy
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5 posted 2004-02-07 10:30 PM




See that jet up there Snow?
That just flew out of the top of my head... ! ...
I think my brain was in it...
Oh well, not like I ever used it much
Well at least I have an excuse now for ,
not knowing what to say...
Because brain or not,
this poem left me speechless...

Except to say that it was absolutely amazing!
And that I really (really) liked it!

Yes...

Oh... did I mention that it was amazing?

Oh, I did?

Absolutely Amazing?

That too huh?

okay good...





passing shadows
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6 posted 2004-02-08 05:02 AM


you're awesome!
EvocativeVerse2
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7 posted 2004-02-09 10:44 AM


Mmmm I almost missed this one...and that would have been a shame. Wonderful piece here Snow. Hot and...grrr! This will get the blood of any young man roaring. (Snicker!) It works on us old guys too. Bravo dear friend.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

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