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PassionatelyRomantic
Member

since 2004-01-24

Posts 190

0 posted 2004-02-06 07:48 PM

She is all things beautiful,
brilliance far beyond one's ken,
greater than ever conceived through dreams,
or to have graced the eyes of men.

She is a transparent night under full moon,
as stars vividly grace the eye,
the ambience of the Aurora Borealis,
as it dances across northern sky.

Her eyes directly portray,
the wonders of the night,
through reflections across the bay,
dancing endlessly out of sight.

She is a blooming crimson rose,
a field of wild flowers waist high,
an eagle perched in his pose,
a summer spent under sky.

A white blanketed canvas,
ushered in by dawning sun,
from mountain range to Heaven,
has surely been outdone.

Mother Nature's ever-changing,
from winter death to spring resurrection,
and all of nature's fury,
yields no match for such prefection.

Her beauty is as limitless as the sea,
the only way to justly fathom,
is as she breaks against the beach,
and pray the waves for you they come.

I really despise the ending... does anyone have suggestions for improving upon it? Thanks

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2004-02-06 08:57 PM

It is just beautiful as it is.
Love, Margherita

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-02-06 10:07 PM

Fantastic! I enjoyed this.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2004-02-06 11:11 PM

Her beauty limitless as the sea,
the only way to justly fathom,
she breaks against the beach,
pray the waves come.'''

~~~~
only because you asked....

but its beautiful, I hope you share it with her...

I lie awake at night
I reach out to touch
Feel you by my side
I reach I never feel you
Will I ever get to feel you again
Just one more time

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2004-02-06 11:46 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is just as beautiful as it is, sweet friend, she is destined to swoon over this gorgeous read, yay, may your princess come to greet your heart, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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