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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-02-06 04:27 PM


So Much More

In the air
I hear cello music
coming from silky skies above.
Meandering through velvety valleys,
into the cathedrial of love.
Flowing by us, a luscious stream,
going to the lake of love,
living in my dreams.

Bright stars on satin nights,
deliver this message true.
I miss her, I love her,
I hope she loves me too.
Yumi, I'm living in an
empty world without you.

JamesLee
February03
2004

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2004-02-06 04:41 PM


OhJamesMichael~
You could fairly make the stars cry with your lovely pennings~

'Bright stars on satin nights,
deliver this message true.
I miss her, I love her,
I hope she loves me too.'


satin nights ... LOVE IT~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Grover
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2 posted 2004-02-06 04:46 PM


Very nice! (but what's luscrious mean?) Grover.
vandana
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3 posted 2004-02-06 04:48 PM


nice read
Margherita
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4 posted 2004-02-06 06:34 PM


You have the embrace of silky skies, always, dear James. And they inspire you no doubt!
Love, Margherita

Bill Charles
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5 posted 2004-02-06 08:38 PM


James - you write some beautiful love poems...

BC

iliana
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6 posted 2004-02-06 10:13 PM


James, this was awesome!  
Enchantress
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7 posted 2004-02-06 10:18 PM


Wonderful write James...much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~
                
            

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8 posted 2004-02-06 11:34 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this Yumi sounds like someone so very special, sweet friend, I wish you the greatest happiness as you are so deserving of it, yay! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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