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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2004-02-06 07:18 AM



I look at him and see more
than he thinks is there.

I hear his voice and listen
for the words that smile my heart.

I feel his touch and all pain
seems to disappear.

It is a gift to accept,
these thoughts and feelings...

And to believe.



"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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MARK V SHELDON
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1 posted 2004-02-06 07:23 AM


...or just to "be" -- without cynicism or pessimism and accept the positivity of something real though perhaps unexpected...  Warming sentiments, Maureen...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2004-02-06 07:26 AM


Good Morning, Mark....

Thank you for an early visit
M

Susan Caldwell
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3 posted 2004-02-06 01:57 PM


I have felt it, touched it and know it.

"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.."
~Dido~

Bohemianaus
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4 posted 2004-02-06 02:31 PM


never to lose it is the trick - nice

God bless and keep you, Namaste!
Boh

iliana
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5 posted 2004-02-06 02:39 PM


And you are blessed! -- with both love and talent!
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6 posted 2004-02-06 03:26 PM


MzWynterGal~
Now listen .. I LOVE the write ... it's just so softly purty and sooooooooooo you~

BUT ... you KNOW ... you just know that the title had me in stitches ... CAUSE I KNOW YOU ... and when I'm done *giggling* ... heck, actually I'm rolling with laughter ... but when I'm done ... I'm sending this one to Marsha and Kethry !!!!

WE ALL LUB YOU~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Grover
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7 posted 2004-02-06 03:27 PM


Very nice poem! Grover.
Marsha
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8 posted 2004-02-06 03:33 PM


little Mo darling one, Margie girl is soooooooooo right with this, the title has me in stitches, and also this is such a beautifully soft and pretty write. You have such ability Little Mo, you truly have and in this brief and soft brush of words you have excellent. I love it, and you know I wub you too. I had to slip in to see it, I'm so very glad I did

And yes I love it utterly
Love you always
and forever
Mushy


Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

nakdthoughts
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9 posted 2004-02-06 03:49 PM


So you guys think you are funny huh???

Geezzzzz  you have me laughing now...and I was trying to be serious...

~sighing~  you all know me too well...and   you only had me for a week at that!!



M

vandana
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10 posted 2004-02-06 06:46 PM


enjoyed

Mistletoe Angel
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11 posted 2004-02-06 06:59 PM




(smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwww, love truly is the most beautiful cliche and truly can answer ANYTHING itself, yay, when you doubt something, know you are loved and there you reconsider! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Kethry
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12 posted 2004-02-07 02:21 AM


Maureen,
don't listen to those mockers who don't believe you would ever lack words. I know better and truly if you ever lack words as we all do sometimes, you can always use the same ones over again.

Very soft and gentle write.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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13 posted 2004-02-07 04:35 AM


touching, indeed and I am happy for you
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