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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-02-06 01:55 AM

Yours Tonight To Write

invite me
to be your queen
and I shall
rule your night
dancing to
dripping darkness
beneath the flame
of waxen sight
where you are
my paper, I your ink
colors brought alive
in black and white
for you alone
are my words
a whisper once heard
on winged flight
wind rereads each
silvered secret
sponged air around us
echoes in recite
sweet is that song
midnight lullaby
in arms that rock you
held so tight
the music starts
now my king
and darkness burns
quick to rays of light
night has fallen
and I am yours
and there are many
sighs to write

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

1 posted 2004-02-06 03:31 AM

Ohhh, was this good!

It was brilliant
and beautiful

It was art...

It is art

Thank You

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-02-06 04:17 AM

*sigh* if only I were a male...this is awesome!

ambrish
Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 257
India

3 posted 2004-02-06 07:38 AM

night has fallen
and I am yours
and there are many
sighs to write
lovely so romantic.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2004-02-06 11:06 PM

Love the free fall and after effects.

Helen~

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

5 posted 2004-02-06 11:25 PM

h,
And this gets better each time I read it,
but you knew that already.

"wind rereads each
silvered secret"

such lines!

e

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2004-02-06 11:37 PM

night has fallen
and I am yours
and there are many
sighs to write

Yes, Helen, isn't it fun to "write those sighs"?

Hugs

Ethel

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2004-02-06 11:38 PM

(smiles) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, God Bless You, you always make romance glow in your poetry! (angel hugs) Yay, this is illustrious, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

8 posted 2004-02-06 11:47 PM

Ahhh...thighs and whispers.

*smile*

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

9 posted 2004-02-07 12:12 PM

Helen, you are one slick writer!

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