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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2004-02-06 09:08 PM




you want for things
you dont need
you plead me to
come back just to
bleed

you want your life
to be perfect and
safe. Except you
spit in my face

how am i supost
to respond to that
how am i supost
to take that?

Come into my web
of lies and deceit
and domination is
what I really hear
from you

The fear of being
without you isnt
there anymore

The longing to
be beaten and
broken doesnt
apply to my
life anymore

All the things
we been through
I gotten over
your so called
"Love"


Unedited

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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Bill Charles
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1 posted 2004-02-06 09:09 PM


Foxyoasis - I read your thoughts and you did say it to the one very well...

BC

Foxyoasis
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2 posted 2004-02-06 09:11 PM


thanks i was trying to put a pic in but i dont know how to work the html codes lol

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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3 posted 2004-02-06 10:03 PM


Whoa, Foxy, strong writing!
Foxyoasis
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4 posted 2004-02-06 10:26 PM


Thank you very much I supose I have a strong soul then hehe

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Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2004-02-07 12:17 PM




(big angel hugs) So-called love indeed, sweet friend, true love is unconditional and never self-restrained or selfish, sweet friend, perhaps he has a lot to learn, so move on and find what your heart wants, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Foxyoasis
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6 posted 2004-02-07 01:06 AM


Thanks guys..but why does people like me that are so nice and kind get shoved around grrr

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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