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HopeS
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0 posted 2004-02-04 11:33 PM



I Miss You And Always Will

I'll be forever wondering
Until the day that I die
Why you left in silence
Without saying goodbye

Friends for seven years
I began to feel secure
Its the not knowing why
That I will have to endure

Knowing I'll never forget
Those years we shared
My tears now flow easily
For I believed you cared

I now find this empty void
I know only you could fill
As sadness overwhelms
I miss you and always will


HopeĀ©2004


© Copyright 2004 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2004-02-04 11:45 PM




(big angel hugs) Oh Hope, my heart goes out to you, dearest friend, I know how it feels to lose a close friend and know we are always here for you if you need someone to talk to or a shoulder to lean on! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I send heart hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

HopeS
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2 posted 2004-02-04 11:52 PM


Thank you dear sweet friend for your caring reply .... yes the hardest part is not knowing why

Hope

the_loner_23
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3 posted 2004-02-05 12:23 PM


This made me want to cry. Awesome poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Richy
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4 posted 2004-02-05 02:31 AM




Oh Hope, I don't know what to say
except that, even if we may come and
go at times, we will always come back
here to PIP, to see each other,
once again.

And Hope, whether your poems are
happy, or sad they really are written
so well.

I'm glad you're here with us!




HopeS
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5 posted 2004-02-05 06:15 AM


Thank you Richy for your caring response , yes friends come and go over times , this was just written during one of those not having him around times

Hope

HopeS
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6 posted 2004-02-05 06:16 AM


Thank you Loner , your reply was much appreciated , but please don't shed tears , I have shed enough for both of us
Hope

Ludo
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7 posted 2004-02-05 01:43 PM


Ahh I feel for you, and your feelings of emptiness. Good write, it captured the sense of emotion well.

*hugs* nothing to say other than we love you.

Kie
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8 posted 2004-02-05 04:27 PM


This brought tears to my eyes. I hope you get the answers your heart needs. My heart goes out to you. Kie
JamesMichael
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9 posted 2004-02-05 05:54 PM


Nice expression of words from the feelings of your heart...James
Youngatheart
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10 posted 2004-02-05 07:10 PM


Not knowing why someone has left will eat at you forever and the emptiness may never be filled without the closure. Loving so deeply someone you can never have can be a burden for a lifetime that you can never unload.
Enchantress
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11 posted 2004-02-05 07:33 PM


Beautifully penned Hope...
with such a ache...
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~
                
            

Rick
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12 posted 2004-02-06 08:24 AM


Dear Hope, time is ours to nurture as best as we can, people change over time and though maybe mistaken, some take the chance on change. How many of us live not as the person that we really are? Cherish the seven years of good times and memories, I hope, Hope that the parting was not too heartbreaking; be strong and brave, there will be a soul mate out there who will last a lifetime, good luck in the search.

Be well my friend and take care.

Sincerely
Rick

Susan Caldwell
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13 posted 2004-02-06 09:52 AM


Sometimes we just outgrow.  

Sadly sweet piece.


Margherita
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14 posted 2004-02-06 06:47 PM


Dear Hope, your sensitive heart always touches me.
May you release your pain and trust that love will fill your heart again.

Love and hugs. Margherita

vandana
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15 posted 2004-02-06 06:48 PM


enjoyed
Bill Charles
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16 posted 2004-02-06 09:06 PM


HopeS - a corner of the heart seems to be there for the ones we miss...

BC

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17 posted 2004-02-06 09:29 PM


I now find this empty void
I know only you could fill
As sadness overwhelms
I miss you and always will


Hope this one really touched the heart.
I could feel the hurt and disappointment so
real in it.
Hugs to you,  
Ethel

iliana
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18 posted 2004-02-07 12:22 PM


My belief is that true love never dies.  It may disappear from sight, but, oh well, you know all too well.  Well written sorrow.
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