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Snow
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0 posted 2004-02-04 06:57 PM



tongue drunk MP3




"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

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1 posted 2004-02-04 08:06 PM


You've certainly got the voice for your writing.  Very well done.
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2 posted 2004-02-04 08:37 PM


Really good post, well written and well read, ty for this one
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3 posted 2004-02-04 11:52 PM




(big angel hugs) Wow, this is powerful, sweet friend, this has a very somber and grave tone to it, yet vampires can be just as temperate as everyone else as their desire has a downfall also, God Bless You, this is so well-written, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Snow, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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4 posted 2004-02-05 02:47 AM



Okay, now that was just too amazing!

I couldn't get the other mp3 to work on
your other post Snow.

But it's really something to hear you
recite this, especially in the tone and
style in which you do it.


Just too amazing!

Thanks Snow, this was great!



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5 posted 2004-02-05 03:16 AM


I love it.
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6 posted 2004-02-05 09:19 AM


masked intruder, thank you for reading and commenting.

pezz1, thank you !

noah, this isn't really about a vamp. but more about how someone can drain us emotionally... thank you very much for your comment.

richy, your comments have become a favorite part of my day... thank you so much for always giving me a smile.

kaoru, thank you!
snow

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

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7 posted 2004-02-05 09:47 AM


very good to hear this in your voice...i liked it!
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8 posted 2004-02-06 12:43 PM


Hi Snow. You've got another winner here. I love it. The MP3 is great. Felt like I was listening to Anne Rice. I like this so much I am keeping it! The background music just added something to the whole experience. WOW!

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9 posted 2004-02-06 12:58 PM


ahhh the music, is by Pasi Sivula from his Wheel of Time Hymns, He's wonderful and has allowed me to use his music on my site for the past 6yrs... this music i used for, tongue drunk, is titled The Age of Legends. i'm glad you liked it

thank you very very much for your thoughts!!


Snow

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

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10 posted 2004-02-06 01:09 AM


must confess...you had me at the title...the mp3 was bonus
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11 posted 2004-02-06 01:15 AM


twice this week someone has said to me..

i must confess...


this is the only time i liked what i heard *smile*
thank you!!

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

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