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LeeJ
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0 posted 2004-02-02 11:54 AM


Maestro’s prose giving reason  
Transferring semblance
Sophisticated emphasis
Sinking talons right into the depth of my pages
Sustained plumage, sometimes silly
And a hundred other things of potential
Take me by the hand, smiling, blushing
Lexical soprano, like a willow in the breeze
Nymph with flowing hair dipping into a stream
Circling souls in a personal Baroque
Significant kinship
Seeing words made flesh and bundled together
Inner self, submits to what the mind believes
Within the throes of antiquated zenith
Molten with blossoms, thoughts launched by Zen
Simply by gesturing ancestors, we calm egress
To springs pristine earthly forms imbued
Simplicity at it’s greatest preview
Stilling feast, resounding peace
Oh this wonder to my ears
Countless melodies, lapping silence
My heart is the only well, catching rain soaked love
Green it sparkles, like a robin’s song
Your eyes tip toe the meadows of my being
Where only you know, that smothering fire
Bringing a deepening grace alive again
Like the aurora of sea foam, rich and ripened repose
Appearing in my mind like a blossom never seen before
A tropical flower of childhood, inner connection
And I trust you


© Copyright 2004 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
EvocativeVerse2
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1 posted 2004-02-02 12:45 PM


This needs to be bumped back up LeeJ. Wonderful piece.

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passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-02-02 12:47 PM


standing with Kevin here
Ericc
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3 posted 2004-02-06 08:38 AM


Wow!!

Eric

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