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Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-01-27 08:38 PM

dodoitsu #5
*fool*

moon keeper pull down the shades
Heart, took a small chance on Fate
while Hope, heard laughing; whispered
to the stars, you fool

©snow
may'03

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

1 posted 2004-01-27 08:42 PM

excellent...but then again, your writing always is...I think I missed the previous 4

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

2 posted 2004-01-27 08:45 PM

no you haven't missed any... you just inspired me to pull one of my favorites from the files.

:-) i'm glad you liked it.

snow

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

Hales
New Member

since 2004-01-19

Posts 3

3 posted 2004-01-27 08:54 PM

Ignorant stuff removed. Sorry, guys, for letting critters sneak in through the door.

Ron

[This message has been edited by Ron (01-27-2004 10:21 PM).]

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

4 posted 2004-01-27 08:57 PM

LOL oh god...

there's one everywhere.

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

5 posted 2004-01-27 09:26 PM

Goodness, Snow, this is awesome! Sincerely, Sauni.

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-01-27 09:32 PM

Fantastic!
Love the form.
Hugs~

~ Is that love I see in your eyes...
or merely a reflection of mine? ~

wintertao
Member

since 2003-11-17

Posts 366
Okaloosa Island, FL

7 posted 2004-01-27 10:09 PM

yes,
I recall this well - hope you are doing well old friend. You are an excellent writer.

Cheers

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

8 posted 2004-01-27 10:44 PM

Very, very good imagery! Grover.

J.Samm
Member

since 2004-01-12

Posts 415
Iloilo City, Philippines

9 posted 2004-01-27 10:57 PM

very smart lines... well done!

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

10 posted 2004-01-29 07:21 PM

sauni, thank you so much!

enchantress, i'm glad you liked it. thank you

tes, thanks for the comment.

grover, thank you !!

j.samm, thanks so much.

snow

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

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