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Stepharoo
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 149
Washington, USA

0 posted 2004-06-29 08:03 PM

Tell me now
Tell me straight,
I need to know if this is fate.
Cause if its not then I need to know,
So I can move on and let my life go.
I’m not looking for a new someone like you,
I’m done with guys just like you.
We can still be friends,
Just not the best.
You ask why?
I’ll tell you this.
You ripped my heart out of my chest.
And you expect me to be all right with this?
Wow you are wrong; I can’t believe I’m explaining this.
You need to grow up just a little less than a lot,
So then I can have a real talk with you that’s just not a loss.
So while you are growing up, just remember how you let me become something that you lost.

tapper798
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 353
My own world

1 posted 2004-06-29 10:48 PM

I liked this one! I can really relate to it also! keep it up

Love is giving him the ability to break your heart...but trusting him enough to know he won't.

SwEeTnSeXy18
Member

since 2000-09-18

Posts 247
nc

2 posted 2004-06-29 11:55 PM

I love the line you need to grow up just a little less then a lot! Sorry you got hurt...take care

Lisa

~in order to gain, you have to lose~

edwreck02
Junior Member

since 2003-08-08

Posts 24
Florida

3 posted 2004-06-30 12:33 PM

theres nothing better than letting a guy know what he's lost, whats even better is when is feels his loss, I dwell in the luxury of my own loss, keep up the writing I like your words

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

4 posted 2004-07-01 03:28 AM

damn. this is my favorite by you so far, i completely get the feeling. it's almost kinda like you're in my head a little. i liked the title. gl with the situation. i think this one's going in my library just in case i'm in this situation again so i can be like 'yeah!" lol. thanks for sharing.

b e r g u n d y

"Be who you want and do what you will, in the end those who matter won't mind, and those who mind won't matter." -Dr Suess- (a brilliant man)

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2004-07-05 12:56 PM

Wow...I can REALLY relate to this poem.
Hope you don't mind, but I'm adding it to my library!

~Alli~

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