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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world 
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I wrote this on how I am feeling right now. It explains exactly how I feel..it's about how I feel one way and then completly opposite later. Let me know what you thinK! Sometimes Sometimes I feel beautiful, With the wind blowing in my hair, Feeling it softly against my back, With my skin always so fair. Then sometimes I feel ugly, Like with me there’s nothing right, Like there’s no way I could be beautiful, So darkened, without light. Sometimes I feel loved, Knowing there’s many who care, Knowing I am liked and loved, Love that can’t be compared. Then sometimes I feel unloved, Like no one cares at all, Feel like no one will be there for me, To catch me if I fall. Sometimes I feel happy, With who I am today, Happy with my love and Weird loving ways. Other times I feel sad, Why can’t I be much more? Why can’t I be the one All the guys adore? Sometimes I feel hyper, Filled with energy and love, I feel I am blessed from Things sent from up above. Other times I’m tired, And filled with sleepiness and dislike, Like nothing ever goes my way, Nothing ever goes right. I am what you would call a typical teen, A typical girl of today, Depending on my mood, My emotions will sway. I’m sorry if I get emotional, Or I start to cry, I will have my reasons, Maybe now you understand why. -Erin "If ever you think of me out of the blue, just remember it's all the kisses I've blown in the air finally catching up with you!" |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
Im soo amazed,,this poem is soo cute ,,i loved it,,,,,,espcially when you said \ Other times I feel sad, Why can’t I be much more? Why can’t I be the one All the guys adore? i think this part was'nt that good in my opinion because i dont think everything that guys want is right and the same for girlz ,,,may be guys just want an stupid girl with no brian and just sleep with her ,,well sis just take ccare and keepposting this pom is amazing im trully amazed....what should i say more than im loving it... loveszzz peace I hate the world because it does'nt have a taste, i HATE the world because it does'nt have a color.!! |
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