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Teen Poetry #7

The Adult World

Don_Juan
Member

since 2004-04-08

Posts 252
Far from where I am going

0 posted 2004-05-14 08:06 PM

The Adult World

well formed hypocracies
never sharing
your life experiences
just order
us around
as though
you were never
as we are now
treat us
as unequals.
who thought
equality would have
an age limit
if i've told you once
i've told you a thousand times
only one thousand
because of the echoes
within your brainless skull
set the rules
and never abide
rule until you die
rule until your
tyranny
becomes our own

eh it was a spur of the moment thing. Hope you guys like it.

nice use of muffin

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

1 posted 2004-05-14 10:17 PM

I like it... even though i can only relate a little, it has to be one of the koolest poems i have read today!!!

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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