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Don_Juan
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since 2004-04-08
Posts 252
Far from where I am going

0 posted 2004-05-14 08:22 PM


Warmonger

Start a fight
and think nothing
is wrong with it.
speak in threats
with no backing.
are you such a war monger
that you would start a battle
with your own son?
We have fought
and we've had
Knock down Dragouts
this time the outcome
will not be the same
your threats
will be accepted and repelled
and you fists will be returned
your eyes will be swollen
and your face rearranged
because living in fear
just will not suffice anymore
your downfall is at hand
and your tyranny will finally
come to an end

yeah this was another one of those forced poems. I've had no time to develop it so i need some comments. I hope you liked it anyway

nice use of muffin

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sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11
Posts 418
Earth
1 posted 2004-05-14 10:07 PM


haahahahaha ..i kiinda saw this poem in my eyes kinda funny...but it was soo cute keep it upp..great workkk

I will cover you with my blood,not only because
i love you but because your are the one that turned my blood a color....

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