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Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

0 posted 2004-04-20 07:32 PM

pretty face on a magazine.
dirty fingers turn the pages.
so determined to point out the contrasts.
try not to look at the clock, time is irrelevant.

moments in the childhood folly,
the things I held so dear,
let them go,
they mutilate my image altogether.

I tend to vomit emotionally each time I see you.
my heart is red and ozzing,
I wish I had a reason for all my words
vicious consumption of flesh.

Take a sip of my artificial, factory produced love.
Perhaps the product of your magazine dreams.
all I carry is generic, and ugly.
But in reality, that's what beauty is made of
...is it not?

[This message has been edited by Lexy (04-22-2004 05:09 PM).]

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

1 posted 2004-04-21 02:47 PM

wow... this is different. Unique, i love it. Amazing write.
Kissa

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

2 posted 2004-04-21 06:07 PM

wonderful....

~Alli~

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

3 posted 2004-04-21 06:35 PM

amazing

no matter what i'll always love you
i swear

drummerboy678
Member

since 2003-10-28

Posts 134

4 posted 2004-04-21 06:38 PM

Wow, this is great! Seriously, awesome write.

"Take a sip of my artificial, factory produced love"

My favorite lines.

Maybe try to change a couple of the cliched lines, like the "knives", but really, dont change much.

Great write!

Sass
Junior Member

since 2003-05-10

Posts 21

5 posted 2004-04-21 10:47 PM

lexy...as always I admire your poems. You are amazing and so talented. I love you honey. keep up the good work. and call me!
~Kassi

apsara
Member

since 2000-11-09

Posts 70

6 posted 2004-04-23 04:07 AM

i love this one. adoring pages of artificiality, even i am guilty of that. funny how the brainwash goes.

good job.

UnsilencedWords666
Member

since 2003-11-19

Posts 63
Broken Memories & Falling Tears

7 posted 2004-04-23 09:25 AM

wow-this was really well written...keep up the great work

You can’t choose who you are Only what you will be Why can't you choose To let me be me...*~*Nessa Bear*~*

loner187
Member

since 2004-03-21

Posts 106
Upstate New York

8 posted 2004-04-23 11:19 PM

Amazing...I, too, am a fan of your work. You always write great stuff, so emotional and unique.

What if the hokey pokey is what it's all about?

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