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Teen Poetry #7

these feelings

wishing on a star
Junior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 19
sleeping in my warm bed =)

0 posted 2004-04-17 04:24 PM

you make me feel special
and important to the world
like i have a reason to exist
you send a warmth to my heart
everytime you hold my hand
the way you caress my cheek
right before you kiss me
it sends this ... feeling
through my entire body
but, everytime we kiss
or whenever we hold hands
i get this nervous feeling
like im a little kid again
thats ok because i love it
you make me feel this way
and i've never felt it before

young naive & vulnerable to the world

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

1 posted 2004-04-17 08:01 PM

I thought this poem was alright i just had no structure...keep writing

when you live you begin to die
when you die memories of you life lives in others
when memories of you begin to fade
you truly begin to die

aRiEsAnGeL
Member

since 2004-03-04

Posts 53
Florida

2 posted 2004-04-17 11:36 PM

thats exactly how i feel about my boyfriend.Great write.

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

3 posted 2004-04-17 11:38 PM

i felt good about reading this poem keep it upp

::^love^::

wishing on a star
Junior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 19
sleeping in my warm bed =)

4 posted 2004-04-18 10:26 AM

Thanx you guyses! 'preciate it!!

young naive & vulnerable to the world

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