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Fariegirl
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 147

0 posted 2004-04-09 12:55 PM

We see things that would shock you,
appall you,
scare you.

But don't worry, we'll be all right,
we'll be fine,
we'll be okay.

You might cry for us, but we cry enough,
plenty,
we do.

We have made it this far,
we made it,
we're here.

You have to let us go,
move on,
say bye.

You will miss us,
we'll write,
we'll call.

Trust me, it's okay,
it's our time,
we'll be fine.

~*Faries exist.*~

Sweetest Sorrow X
Member

since 2004-01-19

Posts 146
From a cradle to a casket

1 posted 2004-04-10 07:38 PM

I really really really really....Love this poem. Wow I keep re-reading it to take it all in. Great write!

Sometimes it hurts more for me to smile in front of everyone
....Then to cry Alone

to her own reflection she said " i will be stro

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

2 posted 2004-04-11 06:47 PM

Great poem.

~Alli~

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

3 posted 2004-04-12 12:44 PM

WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW....GREATTTTTTTTTTTT POEM....lolol..i think i would have to give that poem to my parents..lolol...welll gret888 poem and i love it keep writtin please i would love to hear from u more.....

::^love^::

UnsilencedWords666
Member

since 2003-11-19

Posts 63
Broken Memories & Falling Tears

4 posted 2004-04-13 06:44 PM

I liked it alot...keep on writing...

*~*nessa bear*~*

You can’t choose who you are Only what you will be Why can't you choose To let me be me...*~*Nessa Bear*~*

wishing on a star
Junior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 19
sleeping in my warm bed =)

5 posted 2004-04-14 08:15 AM

Hey chik! Niiiiice poem!! i liked it soo much!! keep it up!!
<33~Chloey

young naive & vulnerable to the world

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

6 posted 2004-04-14 03:51 PM

hey, i thought this was pretty good too...but I'm sortove in the dark as to why almost everyone that has posted about this is so exited about it? not that it's bad, I'm just puzzled is all...lol. maybe it's just me. oh well.

- River

sleep my precious slumber

spritrider87
Member

since 2003-05-31

Posts 294
NH

7 posted 2004-04-14 03:58 PM

i like it alot. it desribes me. how i feel what i wish i had the guts to say. im adding you to my library. (i know i cant spell)

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