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sweet_cute_palestinian04
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0 posted 2004-04-13 09:05 PM



can you reall feel the pain of saying good-byes?
can you say you love me after you hurt me?

can you love me with no respect?.
i loved you so much with all i have?

i gave you my heart but you just threw it way.
i told you i cant make it to the end because im still too young..

you did'nt understand ,you just left me hurt.
why ,why why why???

please answer me i cant live without you it has been now for just 10 minutes.,how does you expect me to live for another 10 years or even more ??

i love you with all i have i gave you the respect and honesty.

i gave you my full heart ,i fought for you with my family just to portact our life .

two years can you just leave them for nothing??.
you said " i lost many things in life so it wont hurt to forget you"...

how do you expect me to live when your mad at me??
please please,,all am asking you to leave me ,DONT LOVE ME...JUST DONT BE MAD AT ME ,I LOVE YOU AND ALWAYZ WILL

YOU know i told you "US "  we have easy heart ,we give too fast and we love to fast??..

all i am asking you is pplease forgive me.

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1 posted 2004-04-13 09:27 PM


a sweet plea for forgivness....hugsss dear...I understand..

~~**~~
The sound of silence calls,
I hear your voice and suddenly
I'm falling, lost in a dream
The echo of our souls meet
~~**~~

sweet_cute_palestinian04
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2 posted 2004-04-14 12:30 PM


sorry about some spellin
Fleur
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3 posted 2004-04-14 11:20 AM


Nice Poem, sweet_cute_palestinian04...

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4 posted 2004-04-14 06:17 PM


good poem - really enjoyed it.

~Alli~

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