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Teen Poetry #7

What I Need

muchos
Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 102

0 posted 2004-01-12 01:45 PM

I miss you day and night
I know you miss me too
I'll love you now and always
I truly care for you.
You're my sun, my life my breath of air
That keeps me so alive
And not having you is hard to bare
Will you stay with me for life?
You are a dream come true
When you hold me tight
So safe and so secure
It always feels so right
I wish that you were here
I do not have your heart
Losing you is what I fear
And it tears me all apart
I need you in my life some more
You make it all ok
To have your arms surround me
Is what I need today

lilibeelee
Member

since 2001-07-12

Posts 143

1 posted 2004-01-12 08:57 PM

Very cute poem. Good job!

*bleeding 4 eternity*
Junior Member

since 2005-07-16

Posts 10
Alabama, U.S.

2 posted 2005-07-17 12:21 PM

good job. this reminds me of how i feel right now.

CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
Member

since 2003-07-16

Posts 248

3 posted 2005-07-17 02:12 PM

Agreed, very cute, well written.

_ker

I cant believe how long i waited
for the boy to turn into my man...

Now if i could figure out, if it was worth the wait.

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