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dertah
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since 2003-06-18
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0 posted 2003-10-04 01:28 AM


ny angek returns
and i reach out to embrace her
i long to kiss the sweet cheek
                  of my angel again
so i try
but denied
she says she cant

i remember now
she married another

the darkness creeps deeper inside
and my soul blackens another shade

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since 2003-01-03
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1 posted 2003-10-04 12:56 PM


Very emotional read. These are my favorite lines;
the darkness creeps deeper inside
and my soul blackens another shade

I know well that of which you speak...

The problem with resisting temptation is you never know if you'll get the chance again
~Bella~

shara
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since 2002-05-21
Posts 69
florida/USA
2 posted 2003-10-04 01:20 PM


good onnneeeee
sha-sha

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