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Curiosity's Hunger

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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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Curiosityís Hunger

The reaper of souls
Called the figment of eternity
Neither a good nor a bad
Somewhere where traits donít use

Seeing a child
This being of nothing
Locked by her hungry stare
A tick in time to one as he

A mystery of deadly proportions
Irony in a glance
With cruelty coming out of a close look
To this thing called reaper

The reaper of souls
No soul has this thing
A vision of a child
To a doll doth she cling . . .


"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

[This message has been edited by RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed (10-28-2007 06:50 AM).]

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1 posted 10-27-2007 03:11 PM       View Profile for rebelangelv   Email rebelangelv   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rebelangelv

wow thats really good! loved it! but suggestion on the last line...she doeth cling. u could change it to she does cling if u want. just a suggestion tho
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2 posted 10-27-2007 03:20 PM       View Profile for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed

oh, well you see the old english, well i read it so much and listen to it it's a part of me. it shows up in much of my poetry, i kinda like it. but i'm just some strange poetic child.

-Kate

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

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3 posted 10-27-2007 04:34 PM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

well, Kate never expected to see you in Dark welcome I liked this poem too...
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4 posted 10-27-2007 05:32 PM       View Profile for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed

it's not exactly dark, it just doesn't seem to belong in teen.

-Kate

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

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5 posted 10-28-2007 12:42 AM       View Profile for Seeker72   Email Seeker72   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seeker72

Loved it.

Keep "doth" as it splices into the fabric of the world that is the Reaper.

Back unto the days of yore, while keeping within the present.  ;-)
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6 posted 10-29-2007 05:40 PM       View Profile for The_Nameless_One   Email The_Nameless_One   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The_Nameless_One

very nice well done
 
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