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1poeticjustice
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since 2008-02-04
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0 posted 2008-02-06 09:14 AM



Our love once an ember burning bright
Now little more than a wisp of smoke
Here, but for a moment then gone into the night.

But she lives on deep within my very soul
Now and for all time.




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Connel
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1 posted 2008-02-06 01:36 PM


Losing love makes for an emotional write.

Nice poem.

midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03
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Roy,ut
2 posted 2008-02-08 06:15 PM


great poem!!
midnigtdreamer


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