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Mad-Hatter
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Mad-Hatter |
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SATURN Member
since 2004-05-04
Posts 78ok,us 
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The matter of these games are simple you win you lose. If you lose, well you just lose. These are the kind of games the Mad-Hatter Plays. You walk you skip you run and play but every step you take cost you a price when playing with the Mad-Hatter. The price could be anything. It could even be your life but you never now when playing with the Mad-Hatter. Mad-Hatter Mad-Hatter what is your game today? What is the price that I have to pay to be in the company of you? Will I live or will I suffer it all depends on the game I have to play. the Mad-Hatter knows and will collect Soon Enough. |
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Musicmaker1969 
since 2000-06-25
Posts 589Peterborough, Ontario Canada |
I'm not sure who your Mad Hatter is, but this is a good poem about the awareness of being under somebodies thumb. Nicely written. What do we have to do to be in certain person's company? Sheri Adams Jesus lives in my heart! He can in yours too!!! |
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Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here |
when I played with the mad hatter in my life i thought i lost but i really won for now i'm under no ones thumb. this is very real for me. Thanks for sharing Annie there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles |
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SATURN Member
since 2004-05-04
Posts 78ok,us |
Im glad it was good for you and im glad you are under no ones controll. thanks for your post.both of you. |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time |
good use of a repetative line, i thought the idea of relating costly decisions to the games of the mad hatter... cool concept enjoyed the read thanks Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free |
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SATURN Member
since 2004-05-04
Posts 78ok,us |
Thanks for your words of wisdom. they will last forever. ~Hali~ |
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