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darkrosexzx
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since 2005-12-27
Posts 4


0 posted 2005-12-27 05:59 AM



In life as will as death in
this world i call home
forgiveness is lost love never
existed and passion is forgotin
and life no more matters grass
no longer green flowers no longer
beautiful im lost in something so
dark and powerful

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Annie78
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since 2003-10-03
Posts 469
here then there then back here
1 posted 2005-12-27 06:24 PM


all is never lost if you let Him in
Annie

there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles

green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
2 posted 2005-12-31 12:10 PM


Yeah, who yearns for a beautiful sky that does not exist?  God bless.

-GIS

So what if my wings are too scratched, cut, and beat up to fly... I'll walk.

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
3 posted 2006-01-07 05:42 AM


dark & powerful indeed...felt your agony and lonliness, hope there is a light soon.

~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



ROBERTDAVIDSON
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since 2005-11-10
Posts 4

4 posted 2006-01-07 04:56 PM



Powerfully written. Your personal despair is haunting and your dark loneliness comes through in every tragic line.

Robert Davidson
http://www.robertdavidson.blogsource.com

sanozatsho
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since 2006-01-26
Posts 14

5 posted 2006-02-01 12:01 PM


i could feel the beginnings of a dark and powerful thing however i found there was a lack of detail.    i keep reading becuas i was compeld to see what it was.  perhaps i cannot see as far as i hoped.  i do expect alot when i die.  i expect as much from death as from life.
though i have came to the conclusion i must live first before i can die.  without this i rob myself of my death wish.

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