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silhouetted
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since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand

0 posted 2005-09-17 04:11 AM


how long have i been here
wiping my eyes countless times
lost in some illusion
i painted carelessy
thinking you'd be here
by my side
waiting

can you find me space inside your bleeding heart?

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Hollow_Emptiness
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since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
1 posted 2005-09-17 06:19 AM


Eek! Wickeeeeeeeed. But ouch, it sounds painful. Wish I could have written this one for sure. Keep these gems coming girl!

Courts.

Come on God, do I seem bulletproof?

vampiana
Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere
2 posted 2005-09-17 06:38 AM


DKJd4632&*HGF784025 ahhh beautiful. short. to the point. awesome. and just... ahh loved it. full relating. and just well you know the mood i'm in right now &#@$

The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love and be loved in return.

[This message has been edited by Masked Intruder (09-18-2005 03:07 PM).]

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