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spritrider87
Member

since 2003-05-31

Posts 294
NH

0 posted 2005-08-16 03:10 PM

What am I supposed to do
When everything seems wrong
And it feels as if you've given up
Like you no longer hear my song
You've looked away
I missed a step
My heart stopped beating
I've lost my breath
Retreating into my world
I just cant get
My head
To wrap around
The facts
Acting as if
I don't want the comfort
Of a hug
Or someone holding my hand
When things seem to go wrong
And I can't stop the tears
From flowing
What am I supposed to do
When I can't ask for help
And no one sees the blood
Or the scars
And all I want to do
Is drink
To relieave this pain
Yet still
No one hears me
Am I really that silent

I am not alive. Just a shell mearly moving with what is left of a ghost. An echo I am whats left after the true thing has left.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2005-08-16 08:17 PM

I hear you and I know that feeling~~

M

spritrider87
Member

since 2003-05-31

Posts 294
NH

2 posted 2005-09-12 11:43 AM

Thanks, :-,

I am not alive. Just a shell mearly moving with what is left of a ghost. An echo I am whats left after the true thing has left.

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

3 posted 2005-10-12 11:06 PM

No Darling...you aren't silent at all. Your words hurt me...not in any kind of way that's particularly bad...but gives me a pang...as if...I needed to be there...as if I tried too hard to bring you out of yourself. I'm sorry if I've made things bad for you! I really care for you...and this poem shows just how much pain you've been subjected to...please get in touch with me...please...

Yv~Seeing eternal Sunshine
Still shrouded in blinding Darkness

gelato
Member

since 2005-10-27

Posts 63
TN,USA

4 posted 2005-10-30 10:53 AM

Your feelings show through in this poem. I know the feeling and had considered writing one about what i was feeling, until I saw your poem and discovered that yours was so much better. I have the same feeling, but not the words to express them yet.
Very good on this!!

"Buckle Up! It makes it harder for the aliens to suck you out of your car"

spritrider87
Member

since 2003-05-31

Posts 294
NH

5 posted 2006-02-19 09:06 AM

thanks guys sorry for the late reply back so much has just gone one recently that the internet was impossible

I am not alive. Just a shell mearly moving with what is left of a ghost. An echo I am whats left after the true thing has left.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

6 posted 2006-02-23 05:27 PM

yes...i know that feeling. all too well. still do.
beautifully written. i felt the pain...and the i heard you.

I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

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