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The end of time (Challenge)
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The end of time (Challenge) |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn 
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Even when the sands finally fall through the glass the grains, yet remain |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ha - so very true and yes, I am everywhere myself, Eddie, lil' bits of me and memories stuck in my head. (I like it that way, sometimes) I LOVE this, thank you for doing this and you said SO much in three lines. This is amazing . . . |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
That should be carved on my forehead  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
a tattoo , perhaps? *grinning* |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
you still rule, mayor wranx! this rocks! of all the things we try to find... it's only love we keep. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Its like time never ends even after you die. It goes with or without you. Wow, thats brilliant. Yeah, your work still rocks. Right on. -GIS Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
See? I told you so . . . plbbt! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
enjoyed the mood you served up here... you could surely give the master's a run for their money...enjoyed |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Aye, Ed. And then the question remains: "Are they truly spent?" Nice write in the style, man. CB 8) "Only the dead, have seen the end of war." |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Hey its still good. -GIS So what if my wings are too scratched, cut, and beat up to fly... I'll walk. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
yes it sure is, thanks for bringing this up Craig. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sometimes you are so good you just piss me off. I mean that in the most affectionate way of course.  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
*laughing over here* OMG . . . TRUTH . . . |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
offering us the short grains of truth loved this! |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Even when the sands finally fall through the glass the grains, yet remain like change which can only exist with time summon by the truth in the end will always be the same If nothing is something then everything is our thoughts and feelings and all that exists. |
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Free_Spirit07 Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 222The middle of my mind! |
This is so so so so so so AWESOME! You said so much with so few words....."Wicked as m8" x0x0 Free_Spirit07 fear and tears....STOP rounda bout here! |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
::smiles:: First, I read your poem about Tuesdays. I became an instant fan. Now...after searching for any other works you may have posted...I come upon this...the 2nd one read. My response? ::bows:: |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Yes, young feller, you have stumbled upon one of the GOOD ones! He doesn't know it, but not long after I joined, I found myself giving the search engine a shakedown cruise....by looking up all of Ed's poetry that it would show me, and reading, reading, reading...... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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