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0 posted 2005-07-23 02:44 PM



No more tears of fear you shall cry,
For each of you is a dove,
Just waiting to be free,
Fly on your wings,

Take care of each other,
Keeping the family in one state,
Shelter them from destruction,
And I promise that you will rise,
Don’t let this state consume you,

I know you can only take so much,
Before you feel like losing it,
And giving up on this line,
Staring down the hollow tip,

Let us all live in peace,
And help each other in need,
Grow as a community,
Give chance to every seed,

In the mist of drugs and sex,
We lose control and give in,
But let’s beat the heat,
And continue striving,

Don’t get caught up in dreams,
Look for your supply of hope,
When you strength running low,
Look next to your kind for a steady flow,

When you see someone else doing wrong,
Don’t pass up the chance to help another,
For one day your want was their need,
Today you might be without tragedy,

We have to get our day,
That one day we can all fly
Without help, and have our wings
That we earned through righteous deeds.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2005 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
jjote
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1 posted 2005-07-28 02:30 AM


No more tears of fear you shall cry,
For each of you is a dove,
Just waiting to be free,
Fly on your wings,


I like this opening stanza, but I got lost along the way till the end, am not sure where this was going..but lots of wise advice in the stanzas that followed.

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