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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2005-04-29 12:14 PM



My life I'm alive
I can die at any time
To another world
Blurry minded friends I don't understand
An outcast everywhere
Don't lie
I hate your lie
Piddle paddle nothing
You can see and touch
The truth you ignore

Separate yourself
Read the blessing on my hands
Ignore it
Arrogance, but who are you?
Did you forget the prize?

My soul, your life
Matched disease fire fuel
Beautiful art
Each and every breath touches
Prodigy division
Intelligence intellect
Segregate sloppy rest
Liar rot slot
Failure charred
The Father's test

Imagine yourself
Happy me free
Blonde flames
Angel's hair
Slaughtered survivor
Survive the mess
With life no less
War love, not peace
Smash squish crush
Survive

Washed over
Holding lightening
In a bucket
Zap
Transfiguration

John 12:25 He that loveth his life shall lose it; and he that hateth his life in this world shall keep it unto life eternal.

© Copyright 2005 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
1 posted 2005-07-01 06:56 PM


So much of your work has a downward spiral. Your definitely spinning out of control in a lot of your work, but you manage to pull it together to make it work. Good job. Chaos controlled somewhat. I like it.
green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
2 posted 2005-07-02 03:34 PM


Thank you.  I've actually learned to appreciate chaos, because its chaotic until you give it structure and you can make it fit you in anyway you would like.  *Words of a Christian artist.

-GIS

Thr enemies name is Satan a.k.a. "The Stupid Angel"

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