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green_itchy_stuff
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0 posted 2005-06-08 02:18 AM



Leaflet scraps of paper
Pencils made of wood
Useless...
Thus the gift of writting

Ignorant and blind
Here nothing you see nothing
Absent state of mind
Open eyes see

Pull yourself see me
Love, the death of a dollar
Reduction "BACK" to ashes
See God nothing lack

Calloused eyes
Brittle finger tips
Scabby face
Become clean

Open chest condemned
Ribs turned inside out
Inards deterioration
Myself finger another gift

Survivor
Life of confusion
Blood droplets
Love that shouldn't hurt, ...free

Satan a.k.a. The Stupid Angel

© Copyright 2005 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
WhiteRose
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1 posted 2005-07-01 06:54 PM


Well this was just a tad confusing. Just a tad.

Let me read it a few more times. It's probably supposed to be morbidly chaotic..that's what I'm getting anyway.

"fit to be tied"

green_itchy_stuff
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2 posted 2005-07-02 03:36 PM


Its actually about provision.  The pencil and the paper are useless until God gave the gift of writting.  It works the same way with the rest of it.

-GIS

Thr enemies name is Satan a.k.a. "The Stupid Angel"

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