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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

0 posted 2005-03-10 03:52 AM

i know of a girl
do u know of her too?
she seems quite strong
so no one has a clue
she's weak inside
cold
hearltess
she can't breath at times
almost like she's choking
i watch her everyday
and it amazes me how no one sees
i can't stop thinking about her
and of all the pain, that seems to be
i use to admire her
with all her smiles and laughs
but then i looked deeper
and relized she was wearing a mask
her smiles are frowns, her laughs - silent cries
her friendships are weak, but they seem to last
her family - all blinded
by the mask i once knew
but now i see the sad horrible truth
not beauty or joy
only sorrow
pain
and a deep darkness
its saddens me, just to watch her in pain
so i try to get closer, try to see her beauty again
i start to approach her, with a friendly smile
i want to help her, but dont know how
i call her name, to get her attention
but she won't answer
so i got closer, to see her face to face
but she's ignoring me, looking towards the sky
i catch a glimpse of her once beautiful brown eyes
and then at that moment i came to realize
the girl we've been speaking of, the one thats sad
- is nothing like me
but we are one and the same
please someone explain why i was so blinded to see....

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[This message has been edited by s1nfully_1nn0c3nt (03-10-2005 08:19 AM).]

EveGnosis
Member

since 2002-02-21

Posts 300
New York, USA

1 posted 2005-03-13 09:56 AM

the proverb that to truly come to love in this life, it starts from within is very sown throughout this beautifully sad poem. a friend of mine believes that the most beautiful of people are the ones most broken.
i see this girl. i feel for her and with her. i want her to know how much she should love herself through this broken discovery. i want her to not only radiate for herself but to shine for others as well.
you really captured a vivid picture of yourself/this girl. great poem!

of all the things we try to find... it's only love we keep.

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

2 posted 2005-03-14 01:32 AM

Thanx...

"Trina"

Laughter Is The Enemy Of Desire, But Desire Itself Is Painful, After You Get That Which You Desire, What's Next?

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

3 posted 2005-03-17 12:08 PM

This was like reading about myself. Im sure alot of people can relate. This is going in my library.
Thanks for sharing.

If I could fall asleep tonight
you know I’d dream of you
and wake up wondering
why my heart is so cold
~WinterWren~

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

4 posted 2005-03-17 06:51 AM

You're Welcome, Thanx For Reading, and i LOVE Your Sig.

"Trina"

Laughter Is The Enemy Of Desire, But Desire Itself Is Painful, After You Get That Which You Desire, What's Next?

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2005-03-18 09:06 PM

Katrina?

this is astounding and I thought you were speaking of me throughout, I surely relate to this more than you know.

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

6 posted 2005-03-19 08:44 AM

Thanx LittleWing, I Appreciate You Taking Time To Read It

"Trina"

Laughter Is The Enemy Of Desire, But Desire Itself Is Painful, After You Get That Which You Desire, What's Next?

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