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Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

0 posted 2005-03-17 06:05 PM


As you move along the darkened road
The gloomy clouds begin
Never look back or wonder what might have been
The candles have withered away
No longer can you see
You have created your rainy days
Do what needs to be


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littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2005-03-18 09:14 PM


as if you have set something free . . .
EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
2 posted 2005-03-18 11:05 PM


I think you can read this a couple of different ways. I see it as the writer setting themself free. Either way I enjoyed!

"A spring shower was cause to run
Until you twirled me in the rain" ~ BDC

Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas
3 posted 2005-03-20 03:25 PM


Yes, i set myself free

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