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0 posted 2005-02-13 02:23 PM



I left you in the past,
Where all my sadness lies,
And you came back,
Once again to haunt me,

To remind me of the love,
That was forbidden,
Never meant to be,
Leave me be then,

Let my wounds heal,
And let me wash them,
With the tears of sorrow,
Those quench me to this day,

Life brought me to you,
And my love never stood,
The test of your truth,
Why do I feel this now?

I speak out to the world,
That the love I shared once,
Was taken back from me,
I cleave only to my sanity,

What is left now?
Sadness and others concerns,
In it I surmise that this is right,
And our love was wrong,

My heart lied to me-
And I have lost trust,
In myself…


I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2005 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
EagleOne
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Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
1 posted 2005-03-05 02:46 AM


For what its worth it has been my experience that your heart never lies!

"A spring shower was cause to run
Until you twirled me in the rain" ~ BDC

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY
2 posted 2005-03-09 01:31 AM


He's Right, Your Heart Can't Lie, But I Loved The Poem, Especially These Lines

My heart lied to me-
And I have lost trust,
In myself…

It Just Makes You Stop And Think, Is What Your Heart Feeling Real?

Great Write!

"Trina"

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY
3 posted 2005-03-09 01:33 AM


Great Write, I Loved These Lines

My heart lied to me-
And I have lost trust,
In myself…

Makes You Stop And Think, Is What Your Heart Feeling Real??

"Trina"

Happiness Runs From Me, For I Am It's Enemy, Anyone Who Has It, Is Someone I Envy...

Much Luv,
"Trina"

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